Archive for the 'Writing' Category

Proust’s Writing Style at the Sentence Level

Thursday, December 28th, 2006

From the New Criterion’s ” Proust regained,
by Daniel Mark Epstein, on Proust’s work:


What the English lacks—beyond the inimitable music of the French —is a certain limpidity, and also, paradoxically, an architectural firmness and precision. Sentence by French sentence it is as if one were viewing, from the portal, an exquisite Gothic chapel made entirely of crystal, so that both the façades and interior structures may be seen at a glance.What the English lacks—beyond the inimitable music of the French —is a certain limpidity, and also, paradoxically, an architectural firmness and precision. Sentence by French sentence it is as if one were viewing, from the portal, an exquisite Gothic chapel made entirely of crystal, so that both the façades and interior structures may be seen at a glance.

And these enchanting sentences, with their lively variety of length, their perfectly balanced vectors of adventure, their suspensions and surprises always satisfyingly resolved, are congruent with the structure of the whole novel. They promise that no matter how arbitrarily the story seems to be moving that there will be, in good time, a payoff, that it will all, eventually, come out right in the end.

Vicissitude

Wednesday, December 20th, 2006

NOT visissitude or viscissitude or visciscitude, I write, for the sake of those googling different spellings. From Merriam-Webster:

vi·cis·si·tude
Pronunciation: v&-’si-s&-”tüd, vI-, -”tyüd

Function: noun
Etymology: Middle French, from Latin vicissitudo, from vicissim in turn, from vicis change, alternation — more at WEEK
1 a : the quality or state of being changeable : MUTABILITY b : natural change or mutation visible in nature or in human affairs
2 a : a favorable or unfavorable event or situation that occurs by chance : a fluctuation of state or condition <the vicissitudes of daily life> b : a difficulty or hardship attendant on a way of life, a career, or a course of action and usually beyond one’s control c : alternating change : SUCCESSION

Leinenkugel Beer

Friday, December 1st, 2006

A good slogan on the bottle:

“Brewed in Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin, by 73 people who care.”

Gender-Neutered Writing

Tuesday, November 21st, 2006

Gender-neutered writing is a common irritation of academia. Instead of the generic “he”, scholars write “he or she”, or alternate between “he” and “she”, or use “they”, or find indirect ways of avoiding the pronoun altogether, or use “she” alone in an attempt to balance the hundreds of years of writing that use “he”. This has the effect of castrating their writing— or perhaps, more precisely, reducing its potency, since there degrees of harm to it. “He or she” is verbose, “they” and indirect ways obscure meaning, and alternation or “she” alone are constant burps in the writing as the reader runs into each oddity and thinks to himself, “Ah, feminism again,” either with pleasure at the political sentiment or irritation at the political advertisement. (more…)

Aleksis Rannit, Estonian Yale Poet

Tuesday, November 14th, 2006

I was culling books from my library and on seeing Baltic Literature, I remembered the kindly old Estonian poet Aleksis Rannit, whom I knew at Yale. I met him at a Branford Master’s Tea, I think, where he was talking about translation and I wrote him some notes with my opinions. I met with him several times, and met his wife. He was a gentle man with a fondness for the poet H.D. and her other-worldly, Apollonian style. I couldn’t find a picture of him on the Web, alas, but I did find a catalog of his collected papers and this poem from Lituanus, 1980:

DIOSKORIDES — TO BYRON

Stay,
    poet of thunder,

hear through my silence
                                    and
know:
dearer to me
                   than
lightning
the syllables’
                    gradual

                               flame.

Latex Package: Hyperref

Saturday, October 7th, 2006

I tried out the latex hyperref package for my article on auctions at the BEPRESS Advances in Economic Theory online journal that will appear soon. It works wonderfully in miktex. (more…)

Copiadoras

Monday, October 2nd, 2006

I like Spanish. Compare these three labels on a transparency box.

Transparency film for Copiers

Pellicule de transparent pour Copieurs

Transparencia para Copiadoras

In the Beginning Was the Law?

Sunday, October 1st, 2006


In principio erat verbum et verbum erat apud Deum et Deus erat verbum.

Jim Chen altered John 1 [+/-]Open Link in New Window to be about Law. Logos is a hard word to translate, and the concept here is even harder. Nomos is what would usually be translated by Law, but perhaps Logos, as a rational organizing principle, would not be badly translated by it. Of course, then we must think about Law versus Grace too, but that is an allusion worth thinking about. We can call that the Old Law versus the New Law, as some do. Anyway, here is food for thought: have I badly misparaphrased below? (more…)

Spondylolisthesis

Saturday, September 30th, 2006

Spondylolisthesis - forward displacement of one vertebra on its lower neighbor.

A lovely word.

Bob Casey’s Secret Investments as State Treasurer

Friday, September 22nd, 2006

Via NRO, here is a very nicely arranged pdf file of correspondence between the Santorum campaign and the Pennsylvania Treasurer’s office. The Santorum campaign made a freedom-of-information act request, for things such as what investments were made by Treasurer Casey. The Office, apparently in flagrant violation of the law requiring the info to be sent in 5 days, said it would have to think about it 30 days first.

The Santorum campaign letters are a model for how one should write this kind of request— citing the statute, mentioning details of how soon a reply is expected, offering to pay up $1000 for xeroxing, and so forth.

Armagnac via Machine Translation

Tuesday, September 12th, 2006

Here is a quaint advertisement for $430-dollar brandy, translated, no doubt, by machine. I think it was scanned in, too, but I’ve fixed some of that. I like the way it sounds.

1950, Dartigalongue Armagnac 40 years “Barrel Strength”, 750 ml

It is in 1838 pennies Louis Philippe, that Pascal DARTIGALONGUE originating in Lannes Saint close to Madiran settled in Nogaro in Gers and founded his House of trade of Armagnac which is still ours today. Very quickly, it understood that Armagnac was a product of export. In spite of the many difficulties of the means of tranport, Armagnac was conveyed out of barrels with the wearing of Bayonne towards Belgium, Holland and England.

In 1869 his/her Joseph son to him this one succeeded quickly made progress the House, helped by the creation of the railroads under the reign of Napoleon II.

(more…)

A Reading Game for a Six-Year-Old

Wednesday, September 6th, 2006

Today I played a game that Elizabeth suggested to me. I would write down a sentence, and she would read it to me. Then I’d write down another sentence, and so forth. This allows the reading difficulty to be personalized, and even adjusted as the child gets tired. At then end, I asked Elizabeth for a title, and she said, “The Blue Hat”. She Here’s the story that we wrote: (more…)

Reprints and Copyright Law

Monday, September 4th, 2006

Project Gutenberg has a very good write-up of the law of copyright and reprints. Here are some tidbits: (more…)

Capitalization Rules for Titles

Wednesday, August 23rd, 2006

I recommend the NIVA, Inc. Writer’s Block site, HREF="http://www.writersblock.ca/tips/index.htm"> “Writing Tips,”
http://www.writersblock.ca/tips/index.htm. It has a page on the HREF="http://www.writersblock.ca/tips/monthtip/tipsep96.htm">
“Subjunctives” and another on HREF="http://www.writersblock.ca/tips/monthtip/tipmar98.htm">“Capitalization in Titles”. Here are some of my thoughts on the subject, and a convenient summary. (I had an old post on this, but I’m repeating it because I want my new search engine to include it.) (more…)

Improveable or Improvable?

Wednesday, August 23rd, 2006

Both are acceptable spellings, I find from the OED online. Improvable is more common, and shorter, but I like Improveable better, as being closer to the pronunciation.

1712 ADDISON Spect. No. 549 {page}3, I have got a fine spread of improveable lands.

Rubinstein on Levitt

Wednesday, August 16th, 2006

Dubner and Levitt’s Freakonomics was on my Dozen Best list for 2005, but I also enjoy the caustic rough translation of Ariel Rubinstein’s review of it, a review similar in style to Ed Leamer’s review of Thomas Friedman’s The World Is Flat. Both reviews make fun of the books, while also noting their good points, and both reviews have penetrating main ideas that I was embarassed not to have thought of myself. (That, by the way, is a good test for a brilliant idea. George Stigler was a master at that— at the short, simple, seminar question which totally derailed the paper being presented.) Leamer’s idea is “Friedman’s metaphor of the flat world is not wrong, but simply meaningless,” and Rubinstein’s idea is “Most of Levitt’s Freakonomics isn’t economics at all, just smart thinking.” (more…)

Some Sensible Advice about Capitalization and Table Titles

Saturday, August 12th, 2006

The
Chicago Manual of Style has a page of questions and answers on special points of writing style. Here are two good answers, on capitalizing words in headings and on putting the title of tables above the table rather than below. Here is the first, on capitalization: (more…)

Atheocracy II: Atheocracy and Atheicrats

Sunday, August 6th, 2006

What is this word, “atheocracy”? I confess to neologismizing (there, I did it again). I am reading William Bryson’s book on the English language, and he says that a full 10% of the words Shakespeare used were created by him, so I’m feeling inspired. (more…)

All May Park. All Must Pay.

Sunday, July 23rd, 2006

I saw this in Arlington, Virginia, just off of Fairfax Road.

To Divagate

Tuesday, July 18th, 2006

Having corresponded with The Divagator, I decided to look up the word:

di·va·gate
1. To wander or drift about.
2. To ramble; digress.


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