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Dear Sir or Madam,
  
I suddenly find myself looking for a summer job, internship, or volunteer opportunity.  Paid employment would be the best, but engineering-job experience is what I really need, and I am willing to sacrifice money for experience.  I just finished my freshman year at Purdue with grades good enough to keep my scholarship there, though my only engineering course so far is Engineering I-a and I-b.  I did a lot with Python and my writing ability is well above average (my verbal SAT was xxx).  I worked for Five Guys in high school, so I know how to be punctual and dependable.  My parents live in Bloomington, and I would like work within driving distance of home.  Resume attached.  
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I suddenly find myself looking for a summer job, internship, or volunteer opportunity.  Paid employment would be the best, but engineering-job experience is what I really need, and I am willing to sacrifice money for experience.  I just finished my freshman year at Purdue with grades good enough to keep my scholarship there, though my only engineering course so far is Engineering I-a and I-b.  I did a lot with Python and my writing ability is well above average (my verbal SAT was xxx).  I worked as a "Fries Guy" for Five Guys in high school cooking french fries, so I know how to be punctual and dependable and to not be the weak link in a small team.  My parents live in Bloomington, and I would like work within driving distance of home.  Resume attached.  
  
 
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Here is the annotated version, explaining the significance of each part.  
 
Here is the annotated version, explaining the significance of each part.  
 
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*Dear Sir or Madam, 
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''It is even better, but not necessary, to use the addressee's individual name. Use it if you know it.''
  
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*I suddenly find myself looking
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*for a summer job, internship, or volunteer opportunity.  Paid employment would be the best, but engineering-job experience is what I really need, and I am willing to sacrifice money for experience.
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*I just finished my freshman year at Purdue
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*with grades good enough to keep my scholarship there,
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*though my only engineering course so far is Engineering I-a and I-b.
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*I did a lot with Python
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*and my writing ability is well above average (my verbal SAT was xxx).
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*I worked as a "Fries Guy" for Five Guys in high school cooking french fries, so I know how to be punctual and dependable and to not be the weak link in a small team.
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*My parents live in Bloomington, and I would like work within driving distance of home.
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*Resume attached.
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*Sincerely Yours,
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*Benjamin Won Rasmusen <br>
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*[email protected], (812) 331-1123.
 
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Revision as of 12:32, 27 April 2021

Cover Letter for Getting a Summer Job

Here is a cover letter. I will follow it with an explained version.



Dear Sir or Madam,

I suddenly find myself looking for a summer job, internship, or volunteer opportunity. Paid employment would be the best, but engineering-job experience is what I really need, and I am willing to sacrifice money for experience. I just finished my freshman year at Purdue with grades good enough to keep my scholarship there, though my only engineering course so far is Engineering I-a and I-b. I did a lot with Python and my writing ability is well above average (my verbal SAT was xxx). I worked as a "Fries Guy" for Five Guys in high school cooking french fries, so I know how to be punctual and dependable and to not be the weak link in a small team. My parents live in Bloomington, and I would like work within driving distance of home. Resume attached.


Sincerely Yours,


Benjamin Won Rasmusen
[email protected], (812) 331-1123.


Here is the annotated version, explaining the significance of each part.


  • Dear Sir or Madam,

It is even better, but not necessary, to use the addressee's individual name. Use it if you know it.

  • I suddenly find myself looking
  • for a summer job, internship, or volunteer opportunity. Paid employment would be the best, but engineering-job experience is what I really need, and I am willing to sacrifice money for experience.


  • I just finished my freshman year at Purdue
  • with grades good enough to keep my scholarship there,
  • though my only engineering course so far is Engineering I-a and I-b.
  • I did a lot with Python
  • and my writing ability is well above average (my verbal SAT was xxx).
  • I worked as a "Fries Guy" for Five Guys in high school cooking french fries, so I know how to be punctual and dependable and to not be the weak link in a small team.
  • My parents live in Bloomington, and I would like work within driving distance of home.
  • Resume attached.
  • Sincerely Yours,
  • Benjamin Won Rasmusen